LA
May 30, 2008
dawnya2012
The most valuable part of LA this year was when I learned I make my writing more enjoyable to read. I learned this by listening to how she told us to add metaphor or similes to or writing. So that you can still make a point but the readers won’t be bored will reading it. For example we had an assignment were we had to write a letter to a local news paper telling how the mass media is hazardous for children. And I started my essay like this. “Last week 15yr olds Daniel and Timothy Lewis kidnapped 5yr old Amanda Graves from the park while her mother was on the phone. They took her to their house where they beat and tortured for two days. If it had been for their neighbor who heard her poor screams Amanda would have died. And when the boys were asked why they had committed this crime they said because they saw it on the computer.”
Even though this was fictional just imagine if it were real. Well with the help of many things I learned in LA I made that a very great essay and got a good grade on it.
Most Memorable Moment
My most memorable moment it LA. Hmmm…. how and am I suppose to choose one with a crazy, outrageous teacher like Mrs. A.
Well I guess I would have to say it’s when she brought in the camera and was going around all day taking videos and picture. I am sure she got me in a few that look really crazy.
A lesson that made me think
The lesson that made me think was when we had to write essays on many things like a law. The government wanted to pass a law that said the any teens under the age of 16 had to been in the house by 9 o- clock and I felt trapped because what if our government decided to pass that law what would I do?
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